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Well, thanks for the next chappie! It didn\'t answer all my questions, but it was a start. BTW, I know I have posted more than 3 reviews... I hope you got them. and as anxious as I am for the story to speed up - patience NOT being one of my best virtues- I do like the depth of character development. also loved the bit about her cursing snape in several languages. I also know several phrases in different languages, none of which are for polite company, but come in very handy when you don\'t want your boss to know what you are saying...under one\'s breath of course.

I must admit I liked this last chapter-14-better than 13. I must admit I ran into a problem personally with the part where Phaelen goes all submissive. while I realize, it is part of the game the 2 characters are playing, I just have a problem with someone as strong as she appears to be, wiht special ops missions, training, and being in the airforce, being so submissive. Althougn I can understand how her character got that way, with the abuse she suffered. I jsut like female characters to be strong, not weak. ther! \"Nuff said! I still rahter enjoy the story. especially the part about the other ladies getting drunk. I don\'t undrstrand why Snape goes from interested in her one minute to complete jerk the next! and will that dream ever be expalined!? Waiting till next chappie! BTW, apologize for the typng errors, I injured my arm and have to type lefty! not so good wiht one hand!

That chapter was great!!! Wow! Loved the Dom/Sub action!

ok...finally I see another chappie!! yay!!! I think that Severus and Phaelan should get together somewhat quicker than they are at the moment. After all, they will be working closely toegethr...and in a previous chapter, Sev did say that the Deatheaters were left with the impression that Phaelan was there for his recreation. They may have to do somethng to continue that deception. I am not sure about Ginny and Harry. I mean Ginny is seriously screwed up, cutting herself and writing to Tom Riddle?? Is she still possesed or is this a left over impression? I liked the bit in this chapter about Phaelan going back to get her weapons; that is more what I would expect given the background of her character. And I love the idea of a girls night at the castle; they need some shaking up!! So much has been made of Phaelan\'s grandmother and the stories of her great great grandfather, that I wonder if there will be some records of him at Hogwarts? Will the fact that Phaelan passed out after touching Severus while he was casting mean that she can be a witch? Is there a reason that she looks so much like Lilly Potter or is that just another torturous plot bunny thrown into the mix? For sure she can\'t be her reincarnation. (and how will Harry react?) How soon before the students start to arrive? Please update soonest!

I came across this story on ff.net and really enjoyed. I\'ve been reading it here since it\'s easier to find it. I really enjoy seeing Phaelen\'s reactions to her new magical environment. I also enjoy your use of comparison between war in the real world and the war mentioned in Harry Potter books. In case you couldn\'t tell by my name, I\'m a big fan of JAG (which is what led me to your story in the first place).

My opionion about Phaelen and Snape is that you should continue with the pacing you\'ve already established. Snape strikes me as the type to need a while to warm up to a person before baring his soul. I\'m all for Harry and Ginny getting together. Keep up the good work.

Great chapter!!! If you\'re going to have Voldie in this fic and it has something to do with Ginny, then Harry should defianatly get together with her. I would like to see Snape and Phaelan get together slowly though. You know kind of bring him out slowly.

severus does not flounce! sacrelige! blasphemy!

well. go on! :)

dah dah dah dah dah.. i\'m lovin it.

THIS IS SO FRIGGIN\' GOOD! I CAN\'T WAIT FOR PHAELAN TO START TEACHING! YOUR WRITING IS SO DETAILED! I LOVE IT! *kisses* o-o (me wearing glasses)

This is awsome I really hope that you write more soon I want to know whats going to happen.

Ok, first off, one review will just not do for a story this good!! I think I\'ll double that number! I seriously love Phaelan. She rocks!! The hotmail addy made me choke on my apple juice! You\'ve got a great story going here. I hope beyond hope that you finish it!!!