rate_review Reviews

Thank you for the wonderful chapter. I enjoyed it immensely, and the final paragraphs actually brought a tear to my eye. I love the Solicitor\'s name. Keep ut the good work. I\'m moving this week, so I hope I get my internet set up before your next chapter is posted.

Another wonderful chapter. I have to admit, I was without my fix as of late. All assignments are caught up to date, thanks to the hiatus. :) I really enjoyed the courtship rituals, as well as the humour embedded into this fanfic. Please, don\'t leave me hanging for two weeks again!

Please keep this going as an AU! I love it. The ball had great humor. Depth of character, and so much more. If I ever do a site or anything, this will be right at the top of any recommended stories. :)

just keep the story going and ignore hbp ( i think snape lovers everywhere are trying to ) its well written and you have a good character flow

Thanks for another chappie! BTW I haven\'t read HBP yet, even though I picked up my copy today - had it reserved since February! I promised my mother I wouldn\'t start reading it until after I delivered her copy - tomorrow! I thoroughly enjoy this story. The pircture of Albus in a liberace outfit had me laughing over my keyboard. And I hope you will explain what was going on with Harry and Draco at the auction; there seemed to be an undercurrent that had nothing to do with House rivalry. Can\'t wait to see Harry\'s reaction to the flight. when will the bit about Phaelan\'s neclace be explained? It\'s obviously magickal. Please conitnue this story the same way as it has been going; to change it now I think may detract from it.

My vote is for you to continue this tale as an AU. Your writing is addictive...although I must admit a 2 week hiatus would be EXTREMELY useful to me as I now have 4 assignments due in the next two weeks, and apparantly, I\'m reading fanfiction when I should be either studying or sleeping. Please continue this story. I think you\'ve done well in capturing the narrative structure of the books, and Phaelen is one of the best original characters that I\'ve come accross. You have a great sense of character development as well, which is something I find lacking in the original stories (GASP!!!! I just criticized J. K. Rowling! Stupid critical literacy class). Please, I\'m begging you, follow this story through to completion. I want to see what happens when Harry goes up in an F-14.

Wicked cliffy. Now tis just waiting for ch. 29. :)

Just want to say hi again. I\'ve been following the story religiously and squeal with delight when a new chapter is up. At times this is my downfall: I read chapter 30 when I SHOULD have been writing an awful paper about research methods for my graduate course. Fanfiction is more fun than research about research.
Congratulations on the complex plot and profoun character you created and the interesting additions you\'ve made to the well known characters. I appreciate what you\'ve done with Ginny... you made the consequences of her first year at Hogwarts more realistic than what we\'ve experienced in the novels so far. Keep adding the flying scenes,too, since they\'re my fix now that JAG is over. Ok.If I don\'t stop reviewing soon this paper is never going to get done. Unfortuantely I can\'t cite your story in it. If you post again this week you may have to yell at me to work on my paper before reading fanfiction. Can you tell I like to procrastinate? Alright back to the paper..for real this time.

There are few stories that I ever bookmark to come back to on a regular basis to check, and this is one of them. Phaelan is one of the better OCs in HPverse, or many of the other catagories here on affn. The original catagory might be the only exception, and that\'s because some of the better authors write in there as well as the usual fanfics. I will say that with your talents that you might consider doing an original piece of your own creation to go with this well written tale.

Wow! Ole Dumbledore now wished he hadn\'t had that \"bright idea\" of recruiting a muggle for the military training. Heh. Heaven forbid that Phaelan were to give a recent copy of \'The Art of War\' to the golden trio. That would derail both sides real quick. Hehehe. This is quite the interesting read. Something tells me that Phaelan is much more than \'just another muggle\', and I don\'t mean her personal background. per se. Something to do with her \'lucky charm\' for sure, and not just the magical binding that neither Serverus or Phaelan really know about. Almost as if certain latencies for magic are just waiting to be brought to the fore.

I am enjoying this story very much, and await chapters 27 and onward. :)