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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Draco and Harry should meet and talk, it sounds like Draco is going to need all the help he can get with so many enemies around. That teacher won\'t go down with out a fight.
Great story
Great story
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should do D first then B then C in the same chapter and continue on from that. With no more A ever!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should do a little bit of all of them so it is like draco gets his letter. Then the professor assults him again but this time Harry sees it and saves Draco. Then Draco suprisingly is grateful and they start becoming friends until draco\'s mother pays him a visit where she beat draco up again but harry doesn\'t know about this until he sees Draco\'s bruised body. draco then tells Harry about his real life in his home and harry does the same and they become lovers. I think Draco should cry on Harry some time in ti story I kind of like a submissive Draco.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How about a bit of each? Maybe in the morning Draco could get the letter, then have that fucker idiot professor try to assault him, harry could see it, try to help drac (talking civily) Draco could get all prideful tell harry to fuck of (hence the fight) I like your story, i just hope that the sexual assault doesn\'t get to far. Draco\'s a Malfoy, and they dont let themselves be walked over that easily. Please update sonn!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would say a mixture of all 4 of your ideas would be ideal but thats just me and I am greatly enjoying your story and can not wait to read more.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far I\'m a big fan Draco angst. As for the next chappie I\'d like to all those aspects except the meeting with his mom, I\'d rather see him have a confruntation with the DADA proff. He shouldn\'t have to deal with both in the same chap. I would like it if he and Harry had a civil encounter so Draco has someone other than Snape on his side. But that\'s just what I\'d like to see. Please update soon!!!!!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait until chapter 6! Oh if only he and Harry were friends. Draco needs to tell someone besides Lucius. He could always use that plant toxin on him. Poor Draco. He\'s mother is abusive and hates him. A psychotic madwoman and the DADA teacher is a pervert. What is he going to do? Too bad Harry hasn\'t seen the DADA teacher doing these things. He\'d help Draco. Just because that\'s the kind of person he is. Can\'t wait for more!
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco and harry. Crunett creeps me out and civilally don\'t want draco jumping of any towers.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More Crunket and Draco drama please. I\'m liking your story alot.
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far!! The plot is really original and exciting. Draco\'s life really seems to suck at the moment... poor bugger. I think in the next chapter there should be some Harry/Draco bonding time and maybe Lucius\' letter (I really want to know what he thinks about what\'s going on!). Keep up the brilliant writing, I\'m looking foward to more!!