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ah.....l love this fic. please please...update soon.

I am absolutely in love with this story!! I'm absolutely dying of suspense now!! I cannot wait for the next chapter! More Crunket/Draco drama! more more more!! ooooh hurry and update soooooon!!!!

Poor Draco! I'm glad Dumbledore is willing to help! Need chapter 7!

Dear Person with a brain, you didn't leave an e-mail so I find it hard to awnser your quistons, you need to read the story better. I've said about three times that the Dementors are no longer in Azkabam, I also stressed that Draco was put under the calming draught. You also need to look at Snape, he's a SPY he's not going to go charging away as soon as Draco tells him this shit, he takes care of the child first. THe next chapter will have more of what Snape does. He IS a Slythrin And NOT a Grifindor so he's not going to just charge into it. He'll THINK IT OUT! Please think before you say somthing that proves for the way I did it. As far as Draco being watched, that's not what I said. Dumboldor said he's have the portraits and ghoests watch Crunket! And if Draco needed help to tell a portrait. As for Ron, while Ron has a nasty temper he DOES have a brain and he's not going to hit someone who is pretty OBVOUSLY already down. I love when people critize me, it helps my writing but if you going to do it please at least think through what your saying. Your only good point was the evidence and why Dumboldor didn't take action, this will be addressed later so please have faith that I know what I'm doing with my story.

awwww this chapter made me cry

Ok this is really stupid. Draco gets *raped* by a teacher and Dumbledore can't do anything about it? All he says is that he'll need *another* memory! So what Crunket has to rape him *again* and hope that this time Draco can get the memory extracted clearly? Why not have Draco press charges? It might not result in a conviction, but surely Dumbledore could use allegations of sexual harrassment and assult as grounds to dismiss a teacher. Even if Draco blacked out the faces of the most recent assult, surely he could remember Crunket's earlier actions. And who is to say that the memory is useless because there is no faces? There aren't many men of his age teaching at Hogwarts - he could be identifyed by his body or hands. Why is Draco being followed? Why does his privacy need to be invaded when it is clearly Crunket who needs to be watched instead? What's to say that Crunket isn't molesting some other student? And if this is some character plot to show that Dumbledore cares less about Slytherins, that doesn't excuse Snape from not thinking of any of this and just standing there.

I think you need to think this through some more, because really your characters are out of wack- Draco is illogical and recovers far to quickly from his rape (Oh yes sir, I've just been raped- but that's ok I'll let him try to do it to me again so that the trial against him will go more easily. You don't need to expend more effort to convince me), Snape is rather dumb and not acting like a ruthless Slytherin Spy, and he certainly was very inactive and passive when Draco told him what happened, and Dumbledore is just plain ineffective. Also Ron's attitude was rather a turnaround from previous chapters- why did he assume something was wrong with Draco rather then think someone had turned tables on him a beat him up?

One last thing- How is Lucius a prisoner in *Azkaban* which is surrounded by *Dementors* allowed to send and recieve letters? This story shows some sloppy plotting and sloppy characterization, but thankfully it is written cohearantly.

Any!! Just please continue the story!!!!!!!! =o)

Yay, great fic.! i vote for more draco and crunket drama and the occasional harry and draco fight. That\'d be nice. *nod*

How about Harry rescues Draco from the sleazeball DADA teacher. I like the story so far. I tend to get real vindictive about child abusers, so if you are stuck, I can think of a million things to do to the Dursleys, Narcissa, and the DADA teacher.

ooo definitely more draco and crunket !!