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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Anon
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is truely great, and i can see Severus opening up to Hermione soon whether he can help it or not. Please update soon, I can\'t wait to read what happens next! ~Joani
person BRIAN PEPPERS WILL MOLEST YOU......AGAIN!!!
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Melody
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is like.... Wow..... I love this! You are my god... I would never be able to come up with this sort of plots and the like! I love your portrayal of Severus. During a few occasions it does seem a *bit* OOC for him, but other than that it seems that you have totaly captured the essence of snape.... if that makes sence X.X. the one charature I somewhat feel that you do not have such a good grasp on however is Harry, but that just might be because he is almost a minor characture, and i\'m not used to that. I don\'t mean to offend though, everything else is soooo luffly, it more than makes up for it! Please update soon, I willl be waiting!
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
person gwenandromeda
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delightful! This whole story is very well written, I congratulate you.

Please, do continue, and I hope we we learn what became of the young Malfoy. ::snigger:: Almost feel sorry for the poor bastard.

Not really.
person kurtcouper
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soo good! I\'m just waiting patiently, mind you, for the explanation of it all. This story has so many twist and turs, wonderfully, but it\'s killing me slowly! I can\'t wait until everything comes out in the open. Poor Severus. <3KC
person chelsea
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! once again i love it!! lol. yes i can be overly happy at sometimes but i love it!! lol. ok well keep it up and i love it. I just hope that he tells her soon. I can\'t take the anticipation!! lol ok
much love
chelsea
person gypsy
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, a little sweet bonding time, hope there\'s more to come. curious about the upcoming confrontation, plz update soon.
o___-v
person killisandra
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you thank you thank you. I really and truly love your story. Can\'t wait for more.
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes Indeed it was rather short, but thats ok, it was sweet and it was nice to get a good dose of Severus\' thoughts and feelings again. I am anxious to see whats up with our Mr. Malfoys as well as the next step for our good guys. I just love this fic and can\'t wait to read more!
person kimibe
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely positively addicting! I love that it\'s something I haven\'t read before and it\'s very well written...I check often for the next update. Keep up the awesome work!