rate_review Reviews

OK - I have to admit that when I came onto this site I really wasn\'t expecting a lot. A bit of smut with no really good writing. For the most part, this has been true. However, I have to say that this story is fantastic. The writing is excellent, the storyline is exciting, the characters believable. I actually come onto the site every few days to check for updates (which I NEVER thought I\'d do). This is a superb piece of work and I can\'t wait to see what happens in future installments.

I think this story is so great, been stuck to the screen for ages! Also, I got the same name as Hermione\'s alter ego, lol

I love your story, the plot line...the romance...the non-OOCness...sometimes...it\'s just a really great story in general. Please continue. When I got to chapter 26 and found I couldn\'t read any further I was so sad...it was a very sad day...

i started reading the unfortunates on ff quite a while ago, i was so unbelievably annoyed when it was deleted! I only just found out about aff so you wouldn\'t believe how happy i was to find your story here! please update soon, I\'ve missed your story for too long not to know what happens next. As for Higsley\'s sister, i must say that i haven\'t a clue what happened to her, i have my inclinations, as i\'m sure everyone else does, but as to what actually happened, i shall have to be patient. whoever said patience is a virtue was either drunk, or had never read this story!
a fan

damn...this guy just can\'t catch a break. don\'t keep ur loyal readers waiting to long, will ya?
(great contrast in this ch.)
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gah, i hate james hingsley already. thanks for the update. Can\'t wait for more.
~Sandra~

Yes!!! Yes! Yes! Intrigue abound!! This JAmes out for blood, willhe betray the Order to spite Severus? Or will he turn him over to get his revenge? This is getting very good....

YEH! can not wait to finaly learn what this James Higsley has been going on about, and who \'she\' is.... Dark past for snape has always been expected, but from the sounds of it (my interpertation) it sounds lie that because of Severus\' death eater role he hurt \'her\', perhaps killed \'her\', which would eexplain her hauntings, on order of the dark lord.... corse i could be totaly off.... maybe he didn\'t like her reaction to his \'assiociations\', or maybe (this would be a cool plot twist to me), she was sorta like Hermione, she had to do some bad thigns in order to save herself, then snape rescued her, only to have him in time be the greatest cause of her pain... perhaps it would be like.... suggestive foreshadowing on his new relationship which is why he is so grauded with her..... who knows.... im full of these sappy corny what-ifs.... But hey, if im right, cool! if not, nothing new! Im normal dead wrong about how stories turn out.... Well, PLEASE update soon!
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~

Can I truly hate and lover a person I don\'t even know? Is it possible. If so, then I hate and love you. The way you wrote Snape out to be. So...heartwrenching and god, when he said

Another great chapter, of course. True, a bit uneventful, but no less enjoyable. And I\'m sure that later chapters will make up for it, right? Anyway, great update, but please update soon! I love this story!