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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person gypsy
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so many twists and turns i\'m getting dizzy. update soon.
-___ov
person wormey
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.... i love the second cello part with hermione and snape. it reminded me of the pottery scene in \"Ghost\".
person killisandra
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah ha i love it as always. Please continue
person anniee
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo i like this story soooooo much!
person angel eyes
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the story he told and thought it was interesting and well suited and it explained a lot.
person Melody
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was like, 10 times better than anything I had thought up! You rock, hard! I just love the picture of this poor tormented Snape, only finding solice in the company of Death Eaters. Very nice plot indeed!
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
person Iren
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The whole thing is intoxicating brilliant! Devillish in its premise, but brilliant in execution! I must say though, is this whole \"Higley\'s sister haunting ghost\" subplot really necessary? Isn\'t Snape enough of a tortured soul? I\'m guessing SS was set to marry the Higsley girl when he joined the Death Eaters, selling her out to Voldemort in the process? Yes? Its the best I\'ve come up with -- she\'s the embodiment of his regrets in this area...? Anyway, again, I heart this story! It\'s delicously twisted.



person angel eyes
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update quickly! i love the mystery!
person kurtcouper
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You stopped? Stopped with the damn explanation?! Oh, how I can\'t wait until you finish it! Ah. I\'m so excited. I really love this story. <3KC
person gypsy
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ty so much for the lovely chap. i wish some more of my questions were answered, but there\'s always next time. keep going as your doing and plz update soon.
^-___ov