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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person MoMalfoy
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!! and it seems to me as if Draco has a lil soft spot for Mira....uh oh. update asap! :-) Mo
person Altariel Eldalote
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. like the plotline, haven\'t read that before!! :D wonderful story, keep it going!!

*HUGGLES*
person ladyevilfaerie
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is worthy all right so keep going don\'t stop. I can\'t wait for more!!! so please update soon!!!!!
person dragon34
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one, please continue with it. I think it could be as good as your first. Love them both.

jeannette
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting, continue this story!
person LucKyo
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting plot. I feel for poor Hermione, yet I\'m so intruiged with how she lives and survives. You definitely have my attention. Eager for more!
person Melody Triton
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scary...exciting
person Loubie
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most definately worthy of a review! It\'s an original idea as far as I know and you seem to be plotting away and inventing characters very effectively. I\'ll keep my eye out for updates:)
person metoo2
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it so far, looks to have much promise. Definately has me hooked.