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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Lia-Bia
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story! Plz update soon, Ill be reading!
person ChevyBaby
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do I think...? I\'ll let you know when my brain starts working again. Wow! I loved this chapter. Very descriptive. You managed to write this with such intensity. I can\'t wait for the next chapter and really hope there aren\'t too many more chapters before Hermione realises just who her mystery client is ;oD
person croesan
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story! I hope Hermione recognizes Snape first!
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person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. One thing: I think Hermione is smart enough to get that Tiberius and Severus were both Roman emperors. Aside from that, it\'s a great flipping story. Continue on, please!
person lydia
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, new chapter. I love the order insight. and hermione recognizing that voice. looking forward to hermione/draco action.
person destiny black
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!I can\'t wait to see the look on Hermione\'s face when she finds out that she\'s been having sex with Snape!Or his face for that matter. This is a very original story,and you really don\'t see that alot with ss/hg pairings.Keep up the great work.
person ladyevilfaerie
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! another chapter. I have been waiting FOREVER!...lol. Anyway awesome chapter. I await your next chapter, and I hope it is soon.
person Bella
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Amazing as always, though I do wish your chapters were longer. :) Keep writing! <3
person Wu Jao
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I really like your story and even if it\'s perhaps a not so new point of view, it is to me.
And furthermore even though it is a somewhat uncomfortable setting, I highly enjoy it.
I hope that they\'ll recognise the mysterious voice/wand-thing soon but not too soon.
So, keep it up and going, please.
Bye, Jao
person Emily
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am quite infatuated with this story. Please write more!