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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person rbrlubber
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Attention: Should you encounter Severus Snape--and I really don\'t care when, where, or how--please tell him I have important information about the Death Eaters that I am eager to share, but he\'ll have to work for it. A quick review of this chapter might be in order. Thank you.
person lemonade
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you\'re back!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next. ;D
person cc
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor girl
person starbright
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
person Ril
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow, wow! That\'s all I can think of at the moment. This story is so good! When I read the description I wasn\'t expecting much as I\'ve been let down by many \'Voldemort rules the world, poor Hermione\' stories before, but this one is just excellent. I can\'t wait to read more.
person Arabella
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) Great chapter! I can\'t wait for Snape to find out that \"Mira\" is actually Hermione. ^.^ Keep writing!
person Cherie
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH, Okay...this is BRILLIANT work. I love it. I\'m on the edge of my seat already and nothing could ditract me as I read...Excellent work. I love all the mystery. I look forward to reading more chapters.
person NobisSolomNon
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, nice, a job for Hermione, but nice. Hurry and update!
person TaintedAngel
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good call on not having Malfoy and Hermionie\'s interaction worded out. I liked the way that you just gave us the after effects of it.
I was so excited when I saw a new chapter that I almost fell off my chair! (yes I am blonde).
i am really enjoying your story. As I am following the progress of many (it fels like hundreds) of fics I tend to get them muddled up and they blend into one another. However your fic really stands out in the crowd for its origionality! (I am not bagging anyone elses stories...see the reviews I give them).
Looking foward to more....much more :-)
TaintedAngel xxx
person dragon34
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope hermione doesn\'t go with Draco, unless you have a plan for her to do this and still tell Mr. Granger what she\'s heard.