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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person divine angel
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I\'m so glad she figured it out. What next though?!!!
person Cat
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg you are so cruel. SO CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAAAA! :\'(
person Cherie
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GUH...I...Come on...Please. I\'m wringing my shirt here...my legs a thumpin and...GUH....Please...Please please PLEASE let the swift writing gods be with you. Oh I think I\'ll absolute BURST if i don\'t read more!
person Arabella
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Evil... but I guess you knew that already. :) Great chapter (and nice cliff-hanger for that matter). As always, I\'m anxiously awaiting on the next chapter.
Happy writing!
person Nobis_Solom_Non
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I love it! Update fast, just for me, please, before the weekend ends! I have a blind date tomorrow, and if it fails I want another chappie of this to fall back on! *molests* I\'ll keep molesting you until you update! *continues molesting*
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GUH, I know I just reviewed after I read it the first time...but after reading it thrice over...I\'m convinced that you need to post another chapter as soon as you can. You have a brilliant mind...this is a great plot and FINALLY Voldemort won...everythings not roses and rainbows. There\'s something about the underlying darkness and agony that I just get a kick out of.

Alright...I\'m gust going to go tortue some puppies now.

Cherie
person lemonade
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*!!!!! You\'re going to LEAVE us hanging like that??!!! Cruel, evil woman!!! Hurry up, wouldja??? ;D I need that next chapter. I like this Snape.
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you stop it THERE?! *crieS* Oh I can\'t wait to find out his reaction to that! Old age is causing him to slip! Some spy *rolls eyes* lol but GREAT story! I\'m loving this! I \'personally\' would have told draco to give me some time to think on it and thought up a beter reason but *shrugs* whatever floats her boat. Please update soon!
person Alice
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its so hard waiting so long for each chapter. I forgot this was one of the stories I was following until today. Even if you were to just update with author\'s notes so your story remains near the top of the HG/SS board.
person ChevyBaby
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reading through the aftermath, i\'m glad you decided not to write the Lucius/Mira scene. I\'m really interested to know whether Claude is a traiter but... I\'m even more interested in what Mira will say to Draco when he proposes she lives in Malfoy Manor. Will Mr Granger be pleased about the turn of events? Not so much a \'cat among the pidgeons\' as a \'pidgeon among the cats\'. Poor Mira :o(