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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Cherie
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES...HARDER MORE...GODS YES!...Or um...er...Right. Carry on.

This is so great. I have butterflies in my stomach...will she reveal...what, when, where, how.....how will he react...To her knowing him, to him knowing her. DAMN this is fanfuckingtabulous. I can\'t wait for the next one. Keep em coming darling, I\'m SO a little pathetic fan girl. *screams and jumps up and down*
person Jamie
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where have I been, and why haven\'t I read this before now? Wow! This is the best HG/SS fic that I have read in a long time, and I cannot wait for more!
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapter. This story is so addictive! I hope the next update will be soon :-p
person ChevyBaby
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s one of my favourites at the moment and I seem to check constantly for updates. 2 new chapters to read through... I was in heaven. But how could Severus think of asking Mira to go into such a dangerous situation? I hope we find out soon...

person Arabella
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, bravo on another great chapter! :) Keep writing! xxox
person Robin
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what\'s up with me today, cause I normally don\'t review (it\'s just so expensive with the minute paying) but today I have kind of a run. I think I reviewed at least 8 stories, but for this one I\'m just so glad about those new chapters. I didn\'t even read them (no time, no time) but I KNOW they\'re great! As your whole story is. thank you so much for writing and posting.
Please more more more more
person Branwen
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She finally found out, awesome. please continue. I can\'t wait till he finds out
person destiny black
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! You can\'t let it end like that!MORE!please? Yay,I\'m glad she found out it was Snape.
person LadyTigresa
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chappie! Though i hated the cliffhanger... I\'m on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next. You better update soon!!
person borg
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD!!!! you ROCK!!! FINALLY!!! YESS!!!!!!!!! ergh, i LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!