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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person tygress
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. I think you are doing a wonderful job with characters and plot all moving together. Please update soon.
person killisandra
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can you pretty please update this? It would be greatly appreciated as I have been holding out for a few weeks now, waiting for updates.. Thanks for the new chapter though, I discovered that a couple of days ago and by the goddess, i did a little jig cause i was so happy. Anyway, anytime soon would be amazing. Thanks for writing
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
person lydia
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Hermione a piece of Malfoy furniture! Poor girl...
person destiny black
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter. I hope you update soon. It seems to take so long.It\'d be nice for all of us who read and love this story.
person shadowchik13
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude! this has to be one of the best, most well-written stories i have ever read! arrgh, cliffhanger, much?! keep up the good work and i can\'t wait to read about what happens next!! i have to say congrats one more time on a job well done! haha i know, i know. i already said how much i loved your story... but one more time can\'t hurt! plus, i don\'t really think words can describe how awesome this one is. don\'t give up on it! (really, there are people who read your stuff, it doesn\'t just sit there... hey, i\'m living proof of that... haha) good luck with the rest, i\'ll be looking for updates!!

KC aka shadowchik13
person june
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so impatient whenever I open this story up. I want the next chapter NOW! lol. It was very good, except that you did my pet peeve of harry potter fan fic. You lit a cig with a wand.... i know this seems like a stupid pet peeve.... but just picture someone doing that.... it\'s just.... lame. Lol.


anyway... MORE. NOW.
person Botticellisangel
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is awesome! I avoided reading it at first, because I normally don\'t enjoy darker fic; but this one is excellent! I really love it, and I hope to see more soon!
person Faith
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I came upon your story today, and fell in love. This is an amazingly good story. I read it straight through putting off everything else I had to do. Wonderful, wonderful, can\'t wait for the next chapter. the suspense is going to kill me.
Faith
person Branwen
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting much better. please continue writing
person dragon34
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that Hermione knows about Snape, when will he find out about her ? Inquiring minds want to know