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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Golden
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoooOOOOOOOOH!
Bloody, Brilliantly good! Ohmigosh! This is soooo wounderful!

I myself don\'t really like long, contiinued out stories, and just preffer PWPs, LOVE this one! Oh, please, you must write more, and fast! I cannot survive....without...moooooooore.

Btw, when shall we get to the smutt? ^_~

:~Golden
person Faith
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it. Can\'t wait to see where it goes from here. Love it, did i say that already. :)
person Cherie
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH.....\"I believe that knocked you off your high horse\".....THAT....WAS....PERFECTION!!! You write snape so well, I adore it. This whole idea is absolutely superb. I have to say that if there were some way to put a back story on this and change the names of the characters so they weren\'t jk\'s...I think you would not only have an AMAZING book but a book that would either be made into a broadway musical...a play...or hell....one of the most kick ass movies ever. I love the way you write and everything just has a pure entertainment quality to it.
I can\'t wait for more and I hope you continue writing while technology decides to bend you over and do you dry. I love this story and I honestly check twice a day to see if you\'ve updated. Not many things can keep my attention and make me sit still long enough to enjoy it....but this is the shit. This is great reading. You and your beta are doing FANTASTIC work. Give your beta some luvin from me as well. *grins*

HUMPS AND KISSES,
Cherie
person Krista
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'ve been checking back daily for this next part, and was so excited when I saw it here today :)

Keep writing! I can\'t wait to hear what happens next!
person killisandra
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i keep checking if you\'ve updated this story but you haven\'t. Pretty please with a cherry on top, will you update this story? PLEASE
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!
person A-dreamer-whose-lost
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping that I might be able to find this fic somewhere else on the web. I noticed that fanfiction.net got rid of both of your fics. I noticed, however, the version on here is farther behind than the one that used to exist on fanfiction.net. I would really like to continue reading this fic; honestly, it\'s the best one that I\'ve found. If you could tell me where I might be able to find your fic or whether you\'re going to update on here I would really appreciate. Please e-mail me at truthisoutthere87@hotmail.com, I am very interested to see where this fic is going.

Thanks so very much!
person Mareila
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome but please write more.....
person Arabella
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'re killing me here, Grill. ^.^
person reina
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon! this is a great story but your cliffhangers are killing me :D.
Keep up the great work and amazing skills,
Reina