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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, this story is so fun! I\'m glad you had Snape greasihaired, so many writers make him a broadshouldered pornstar.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great chapter (times a million!). :) I really loved the scene when Hermione revealed herself to Snape - my eyes didn\'t move from the screen, lol. Keep writing, Grill - I think you have us all by the balls (or lack thereof). :D
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Bella
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!...it can\'t stop there...lol...This is going so well...please write more...
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea! She told him, and she\'s reunited with Harry. I hope they don\'t expect her to still go to the Malfoy\'s.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really really been enjoying your story, a great AU (well, I guess we don\'t know if it is an AU yet, do we? who knows!). It\'s a really great premise and I\'m enjoying it. There was just one thing in the most recent chapter; the use of vis-a-vis. I don\'t have either a French or an English dictionary nearby, but isn\'t \'via\' the word to use there? Again, not certain, no reference books right now, who knows.
Keep writing!
Keep writing!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great installment of a really interesting story. I liked Sev thinking about Hermione\'s transformation for two whole minutes - I could just imagine the look on his face. Loved the flying scene - poor Sevvie. And now Hermione is safely back with her mates. She\'s obviously upset about Ron and the twins but she\'s got 23 more friends than before. \"Killengreen\" is a lovely scary name for a house - maybe Hermione could do some magical cleaning and decorating and make the house into a homely place for Sev. That might endear her to him a bit. (He\'s obviously got no house-elves).
Nevertheless - now everyone will know that H has been a prostitute. How do you live that one down and make a man love you? I\'m looking forward to finding out in your next episode.
Nevertheless - now everyone will know that H has been a prostitute. How do you live that one down and make a man love you? I\'m looking forward to finding out in your next episode.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I think that puts an end to any Hermione/Severus action for several chapters but, it was a fabulous arguement. Just the right way for Hermione to reveal her identity. Severus speechless, LOL, that was great. Please, please write more soon :D
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally she is back were she belongs with the rebels...Awseome new chappie....hope you can write more
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so so so happy you let us get a bit of a payoff instead of dragging it out. I was afraid you would have Hermione holding off telling Snape and going to the Malfoy manor for six more chapters!! (I\'ll never doubt you again ;D ) Wonderful. Please keep going!!!! Love your writing.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I can\'t believe that Hermione revealed herself.