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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person applekissis
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dont know about the title and song..but I loved the chapter..It was great...They have a lot to work out and get through,but im glad they admitted their love~~~
person Sally
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fanfic! Please continue it soon. *sits back, and eagerly awaits Chapt. 32*
person Casi
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I came to this site purely after decent smut. It was late, I was bored, and what better is there to do than read HP smut? Unfortunately this story wasn
person CSI Salyards
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see an update!! I have to admit I'd almost given up hope... but I couldn't let a brilliant story such as this be given up on. Thank you for the update it was wonderful! Hope to see more very soon! How about very very soon? :) Forget real life! Hehe... j/k.
person Faye8222
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon please I can't wait to find out what going to happen. I love his story. GREAT Job. I give it a A+ A+ A+ A+

~*Kallie*~
person Statues
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummmm....what?!?! Why is this it? More! Now! Christ this is good stuff!
person Applekissis
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is absolutely great..I am having so much fun reading it and I cant wait fro the next update..
person Lexie
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i've read that chapter already. it was one of those that was deleted in a glitch a few weeks ago. remember?
oh well. keep up the excelent work!
person Bekkah
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grill - you promised us more then stopped!!! This is such a good story and I check for updates every time I browse through here...which is A LOT. I keep hoping that I'll find out what is going to happen with the war, with Harry, with the new recruits, with the ghost, with Jim, and, of course, with Hermione and Snape.Please, please, please - If you read this, keep writing and updating!! This story is too good to just give up on.