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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person lauralualrualshaw
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I\'ve read all the way through, and decided to wait until I came to the end (of the latest chapter) to post my review. Did I mentioned the adjective amazing? You write fluently, and it moves along with the story, which is key in fan-fictioning. Chopping stories just don\'t cut it. And since I have a ridiculous crush on Severus Snape, his attitude and character in your story is attractive as sin. AND I\'M ALL ABOUT HOW YOU NEED TO GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT ASAP, PORFAVOR, GRASSYASS! <3
person Akisis
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love where you\'ve taken this story, please keep writing and soon!
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
up-date, please! You left it on a sort of cliffhanger! Evilness!
person catpower
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione - she is going back to the Lion\'s den but Malfoy knows that Hermione is connected with Mira now. I am really gripped by the ghost thing and am looking forward to finding out who or what it is. This chapter was really fascinating because it provided interesting hints of what\'s to come - with no waffle, in my opinion.
person Arabella
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hi5* great chapter! i\'m really anxious to see what is going to happen next. :)
all the suspense - it makes me all giddy! LOL.
Take care!
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!
person forge_underhill
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!! keep up the amazing work. i espesially loved the battle between the two in the \"Hello professor, it\'s me\"! I read it over and over...ahhh sooo funny!!!! hopefully more of those will be coming up....please!!!!!! can\'t wait for more!!!
person lydia
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter, not boring. I enjoy the friendship and the talks between Harry and Hermione, or any talks really, like bwtween Lupin and Snape. So... keep writing!
person catpower
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story - especially Killengreen! Is that a ghost in the garden, freaking Sev out? Please, please keep up the good work. Is Hermione going to show some psychological damage from having been a prostitute? (I don\'t think Sev harmed her - probably whetted her appetite - hahaha).
person Arabella
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) nice chapter! i especially liked the scene between Hermione and Harry - very sweet!

Patiently awaiting the sparks between Snape and Hermione to fly {again},
Bella.
<3