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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person EEky333
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a sadist at heart madam! How can you leave us like this? Well, keep writing please because I\'ve been following the story very pathetically for a while now.
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCK! you are so awful!!!! How can you leave us like that?!!! especially when you take so long to update?! I\'m dying *dies*
person killisandra
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you left it there? are you kidding? where\'s the next chapter? My god woman/man you are going to drive me insane...that was one hell of a cliff hanger.. Bloody hell. and? shall i expect more soon? *pleads* i hope so *gets on knees to beg* please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ChevyBaby
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. With such a sweet ending. I can\'t help wondering how Lucius will confront Mira when she returns to the mansion.
person Metoo2
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story great so far. Excellent idea i dont think its been done before im very impressed by the detail and depth fo your writing. keep the story coming.
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPdate please! :D
person merlinsbeard6
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh!!!! I LOVE your story, it is one of the best snape/hermione fics I have EVER read! and i was SO annoyed when i scrolled down to find that there was no \"next chapter\" button on this chapter! Argh!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
person divine angel
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update?!
person Pixi
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting. Looking forward to an update. Def kept me from doing housework that I should be doing in preperation of new kitten on Saturday.
person beautifullymalicious
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!! I can\'t believe you ended it like that. I love this story!!!!! Don\'t keep me waitinggggggg *sobs in frustration*