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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Anon
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is such a mean cliff hanger
person Neith
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEAL!*

Yes, that\'s exactly what I\'m doing. :D Love it so far, and I\'m going to be stalking you with a rusty spork spear till I see more :O
person Jenn
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always. I didn\'t see that happening, Ron of course!! And I expect Neville to be with him, since it was most likely him that grew the moss that particular way.. :) I just hope Draco is dead or obliviated and Severus is able to get to safety. More soon, please.
person killisandra
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you can\'t leave off there with a completely irate Draco Malfoy interrupting the whole thing!!!! Gah, another cliffie to annoy me to no end. You drive me insane, do you realize that? You know I love your work so please keep it up. Blessed Be as always dear,
~Sandra~
person Divine Angel
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Although I thought we were about to meet Neville... Is he there too? You dropped that line about someone good at Herbology and I thought \"That *has* to be Neville!\"
More please!
person Moi
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I knew it was going to be Ron! But what happened between Draco and Severus? I hope Severus roasts his dragon butt! Painfully and permanently!
person Jessii
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like what yo uhave going on here. I will be checking back for more
person lemonade
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve SOOOOOO missed this story, I\'m glad you are posting again. Sorry about internet and family. Good to see you back. This is the best story ever.
person K
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeek! Oh god, you have to have the next chapter up soon! That was one heck of a cliffhanger!
person Catpower
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My goodness - what a cliffhanger! Excellent stuff, as usual. Keep up the good work.