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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person blase
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome. *is excited for next chappie*
person beautifullymalicious
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In shock my dear. I sat and re-read all the way through to the current posting. Are you sure you\'re not JK herself come to gift us with an alternate universe? This story is absolute perfection. Please, update quickly!
person Selene
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg the story is sooo good plz plz plz update and post ur next chappie up soon...i luv the way u portrayed ron and the others it was rely great
person Brittany
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this last night and I love it. It\'s beautifully written and intriging. I actually think the Hermione/Snape pairing is just horrible, but the way you writing it, it\'s wonderful and isn\'t at all tasteless like I would\'ve imagined. You\'re story has forced me to absoulutly fall in love with Severus Snape. Keep up the good work, and I\'ll be sure to continue to check back here for more updates...
person gypsy
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so happy u\'ve updated. lovely chapter, keep \'em comin.
o__^v
person Neith
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeeee! Chapters make Neithie a happy girl. :DDD

-hearts it all over!- It doesn\'t have to be exciting, because you left us at a cliffhanger. :O It\'s perfect!

...okay, I\'m no good at constructive crit. I can\'t wait to see more. :P
person Emma
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am a huge Hermione/Snape Shipper. This story is very, very well written. Keep up the great job!
person Divine Angel
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you updated, I\'m still with you and still loving every twist and turn.

(Just wanted to point out a typo you missed, an unnecessary \"the\" before Inverness!)

Keep it up, I can\'t wait to see what will happen next and if Severus will be ok.
person katthebrat18fl
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
S_MOON_83@hotmail.com , oh please email me when this is updated!!! That was awesome! and to leave and evil cliffy as ron at the end....poor severus ....please save him....oh no...Write soon!!!!
person lauralaurlaurashaw
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no way girl, i definitely didn\'t expect it to be ron, i\'m not gonna lie. but dududuududes, i hate CLIFFHANGERS&DRACO MALFOY. I\'m excited . Update you whore, I love this shit!!!