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for Once in a Blue Moon

by seekersplayrough

person chantalmalfoy
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol. And maybe a tiny tiny bit of the accidental cuddling crap... I\'m mean... stuff. All of my fics turn into PWP\'s because my muse is a nympho.
person pinktarg
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though I\'m all for the sex, I\'m going to have to vote for cuddling. It seems a little sudden for Harry to trust anyone sexually without first trusting them to not hurt him when they are intimate in even a non-sexual way. Considering that he has little experience in being touched in a non-abusive, non-sexual manner, it seems the next step would be for him to learn physical intimacy that does not involve sex or violence.
person Ditzy
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute accidental cuddling please. Love the story.
person icestar
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:falls out of chair because she is laughing to hard: ah my god! the lists! the lists! :claw her way back onto chair, then falls over again:

:wipes away tears: ahem, sorry. very nice story. quite humourous, and draco is being very, very evil. :sniggers: now all they need is some good blackmail material...

anyways, about the spelling, it isnt that noticeable to me. :shrugs: no bad grammer or anything interrupting the flow of the story, though that is my opinion...

hope to see more of this soon ^_^
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was hysterical! Loved it! Absolutley loved it! lol ... love draco and harry fighting, had to stop and read it again because i was laughing so hard.. if that makes any sense.. lol

Great Job - Jessica
person Ru-Shin
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT CAME ON TV!!?! O_O What kind of TV do you have!?! ...wait....you probably Anime Network or something.... *stares at you for a moment* Excuse me while I go make an angry phone call to my cable company for not having Anime Network.

MWAHAHAHA! XD Draco is evil. XD That was great!! I loved the fight between Draco and Harry. And the uncomfortablness was great too. ^^

I vote for cute accidental cuddling. ^^ Sex is always good, but it\'s a little to soon.

Damn my diet....-_- I WANT RAMEN!!! T-T (Ignore this, I just felt like letting this off my chest...^^;;;)

Here! Have some salad? No? Okay...here then, you can eat my pockey. *curses her diet again*

Update soon! ^___^
person Ima
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEX SEX SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shino
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay I finally got a chanve to read this! *dances excitedly* Okay I must say that I absolutely love how this is going so far. I like the way you are portraying Harry as well. I have read many fics where he is abused by the Dursley\'s (or others) and is so completely traumatized. It is nice to see something different. Not saying I don\'t see the trauma....Of course I think I would be scared of Snape too....but He\'s still able to have fun.... Anyways, I am kinda babbling.... Oh and I like how you made Draco the kind of evil that makes you wanna go \'Awwww\' and pinch his cheeks.....ummm okay I\'ll stop babbling now. Oh and please update soon.

Shino
person Moi
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person anon
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing. You keep getting better. :D Oh, and I love the \"list\"!