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Keep going!!

omg, I stumbled against your French translation and T_T it's like you translated it word by word. I let you know how awful it is : I'm French and I had to read the English translation to understand what you meant.
Here are the correct words for :

"What are you looking at you stupid, pretty boy?" "Que regardes-tu donc joli petit cr

This is a really good story. I really like the first chapters from Harry fleeing from his relatives to the chapter in Snape's bedroom. And yes, like many others of your fans, I adore the "POTTER, THIS WAS 500 Y.O !", it really was hilarious ^^
and "Grim Speck" for the cat's name, it reminded me of another fanfiction about Harry turned into the cat "Grim Speck of Death" ^_^

can not wait to see what happens but you need a beta to help.

This is a really neat-o story.... I like how Snape was making a list of how he did and didn't like Harry, that was real original... Keep up the great work!

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OHH poor harry! Sweet Harry. I think him and Draco should become friends as well.

Snape castrated Vernon?! Awesome. But I need lemon. I needs it. I needs it. But it's kinda cool to see how Snape, Draco, and Harry interact after the summer. Could you show an interaction with Harry and Draco being friendly, or at least feigning to hate each other yet all the while giving friendly cheek. Pleeeeease? This story has great taste. Just needs a twist of lemon.

aww! that was really good.

First off, your writing talent is amazing. I love the emotion and the attention to detail that you so easily fill your story with. However, it seems like something may be missing between "Truth" and "Creepy Little French Dude". I seems the relationship with HP/SS has advanced to the physical, and I missed a chapter or something. With the way you are writing I had believed it would be a slow process for it to advance to that level. In the chapter "How Could You?"-"He was going by instinct now, running with out knowing where he was going. He found himself a short while latter in front of the portrait of Salazar Slytherin, sobbing and pounding at the door. The portrait eased open, and a concerned Severus gently helped him to his feet, leading him inside". You mention Severas helped him to his feet but didn't mention him falling. Minor point, I know, but as that is the only thing I found to point out in 11 chapters worth of material, you are excellent! Heartfelt fics of pain, betrayal, and redemption are great therapy.

Great ! But, what happened really to Severus ?
And please don't make monsieur Lenny talk anymore in french because he speaks it as bad as I write in english. Yes, it is that bad ! ( I am french)