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for Looking Through Your Eyes

by AngelofSorrow

person liz
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story please update
person Sophie
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I DESPERATELY NEED TO KNO WAT HAPPENS!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Thnx for writing (i love the plot, never read a story like this before)
Sophie
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 18! They are at war with everyone. Lucius plans to kill Voldemort using his son with Harry? Hmm.
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew Dumbledore was evil!
person warconq
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you updated. It\'s been a little while. I do hope that there will be some sweet sweet lovin\' from Draco and Harry and what is up with Hagrid and his scared puppy. I guess I\'ll just have to wait and see. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too cute! Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Need chapter 16!
person Kizu
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good story, but it seems like your detouring off the main subject.
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your writing is amazing, but your spelling needs great work. Its hard to read a story without good spelling and format. One story I was reading, used no paragraphs and I ended up using the straight edge of a piece of paper to keep my eyes from crossing. In your story I sometimes have to keep reading a particular place over and over to try to figure out what you mean. Perhaps getting a beta would be a good idea.
person Remus\'s Girl
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god that was so sad. The story is great but that chapter had me in tears. Fudge needs to die the no good god-damned, fucking lousy, piece of diseased rat shit, asshole.
person fan
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this fic/ you really know how to make it come to life/ post again soon