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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha this chappy was great !! now i cant wait till harry\'s back in his own body and draco has to face a \'hormonal tyrant\' himself >XD plz keep working hard !! i love this story !!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 21! Who or what is the Silver Vampires sending to kill Harry now? Why don\'t they just side with Harry and kill Malfoy to get their treasure back? Silly vampires! More please!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but please, learn the proper use of commas.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story (Though you spell as bad as I do LMAO! Or maybe it\'s forgetting the words that should be there, and replacing them with other words that sound close to it. Now in your MIND you\'re typing the word but on screen--nevermind.) but I\'m a little confused (by Lucius\'s last statement in your last update) and I want to know something:
When he\'s talking about getting his child back (and making Harry and the Half-Breed pay) do you mean:
The Twins Harry-Draco is caring: The child (or children actually) he wants back?
Draco and Harry: he wants to pay
Or The Twins and Harry: he want to pay
Draco: the child (his child) he wants back?
Sorry but the last chapter kinda confused me there. lol!
Otherwise, keep up the awsome work.
When he\'s talking about getting his child back (and making Harry and the Half-Breed pay) do you mean:
The Twins Harry-Draco is caring: The child (or children actually) he wants back?
Draco and Harry: he wants to pay
Or The Twins and Harry: he want to pay
Draco: the child (his child) he wants back?
Sorry but the last chapter kinda confused me there. lol!
Otherwise, keep up the awsome work.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please update soon
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
post again plz !!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo happy when I saw that you had updated (bounces up and down in excitement). I love your story and the chapter is really good, I never would have thought that the potions accident was not an accident (hehe, that sounds just weird).
Now, I hope you update soon because once again I\'m truly excited about what is going to happen next.
Now, I hope you update soon because once again I\'m truly excited about what is going to happen next.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr you mean mean mean lil author! aaaaaaaaaaaaages since you last updated!! Update soooon please!!! really really really soon...
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have one thing to say. It is a good story and good plot, but I got confused a lot. Your grammar is off by...a lot. You should seriously think of getting a beta.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Is that Pansy or Cho? Can\'t wait for chapter 19!