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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done again!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story....please update soon....please please please!!!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. Nice touch.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! REALLY kaiwaii! Update soon? Hai? *bats eyes cutely* XD sorry, couldn't resist! Oh, also sorry I did not reply until now! I was sorta, errr.... well, actually I just nmoticed the fan fic the other day and I'm sorta slow at reading sometimes, but yeah..... UPDATE!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo.. I just finally caught up after a long break... had school stuff to door... wow thats a really cool storry, cant wait for more updates...
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrr! i\'m only on chapter eight and i\'m ready to go crazy! u have soooo many mistakes! do u have a beta?!?!? if not, GET ONE!! i\'m giving up on this story, everything is moving too. i hate wat you\'ve done with it. hate it hate it hate it! PLEASE fix it! unless you do, i\'m not going to finish trying to read this story. i like where your coming from, but things just don\'t go like that! how old r u??? cuz i\'m, like, 16, and i could write a waaaaaaay better story!! and the chapters r WAY too short! i\'m going to avoid reading all the other stories your writing/ have written, cuz they r probably just as bad. you need more details.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol well i hope you finish soon! i really want to read more! i have to say though, you really do need to edit your chapters. i found this story yesterday and started reading and in lots of places i got confused because of all the spelling, grammer and other mistakes... plz email me when you post a new chapter!! i can\'t wait!!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your entire story again when I saw it had been updated, I enjoy it so much. I wonder if you would consider having me beta your story? I beta for Petalsoft and Donavon; I am fast and best of all, free. There are just typos, which can detract from the story. Not a criticism, just a friendly offer. E-mail me if you would like to.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I like it! Do you have a beta reader, though? Sometimes it\'s kind of hard to figure out what you mean. If you don\'t, I\'d be more than happy to beta for you. I truly do love this story, though, and will be looking for more by you in the future!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 please! I can\'t wait for more! The twins are under the protection of the Guardians of the Heavens? One of the guardians gave them Helga\'s armour? Oh I can\'t wait for more!