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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I think I should get the good out of the way first...
1. I loved the idea for the story
2. I loved the way you wrote the charaters
3. You really really sucked me into the story, Like I had to finish it as soon as posiable, I even gave up eating on my luch break to read this.
which is part of why the bad part is bad...
I was really into this story and I felt that it really ended abrouptly. It was like ok its over. When it felt like there should have been at least a little bit more to it. the ending felt very rushed, almost like you knew the guide lines for how you wanted it to end but you really didnt know how to write it. I think it would have been nice to read more of harrys and Sevs relationship, or more of how malfoy took it to be rejected.
But over all I liked it. I think that you are a really good writer and I will most likely be reading more of your storys(if there are some, I havnt checked yet) . I'm not trying to flame you by any means and if I'm being to hard here just yell at me or something. I really am just trying to help and be honest.
Keep up the wonderful work.
Wrock on~~ Casidee
1. I loved the idea for the story
2. I loved the way you wrote the charaters
3. You really really sucked me into the story, Like I had to finish it as soon as posiable, I even gave up eating on my luch break to read this.
which is part of why the bad part is bad...
I was really into this story and I felt that it really ended abrouptly. It was like ok its over. When it felt like there should have been at least a little bit more to it. the ending felt very rushed, almost like you knew the guide lines for how you wanted it to end but you really didnt know how to write it. I think it would have been nice to read more of harrys and Sevs relationship, or more of how malfoy took it to be rejected.
But over all I liked it. I think that you are a really good writer and I will most likely be reading more of your storys(if there are some, I havnt checked yet) . I'm not trying to flame you by any means and if I'm being to hard here just yell at me or something. I really am just trying to help and be honest.
Keep up the wonderful work.
Wrock on~~ Casidee
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's it? I was hoping for more when I started. Needs a sequel or something.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was wonderful!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soooo Cute :)
Thanks for this sweet little story, which cheered up a very boring Thursday!
Thanks for this sweet little story, which cheered up a very boring Thursday!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I LOVED IT! Is that the end? *cries* it\'b be so awesome to expand on the story but nevertheless AWESOME!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You jest. That cannot be the end.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great
I love the plot and I love the twists and turns
I love the plot and I love the twists and turns
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!! Maybe a sequal where Draco is so obbsessed in his love for harry!! but all in all the story is wonderful.