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I don\'t know if it is system glitch or what, but the spacing of the lines on this make it very difficult to read. Also, there are a number of spelling and grammatical errors. Do you have a beta? It\'s an interesting thought, though, that Hermione is a Pureblood witch. I hope she realizes that as Voldemort was killing Muggles and Muggleborns at that time, his followers, including her birth father, were on a Ministry target list.

Very interesting plot.

~Lisa

Awsome chapter! Update soon! I can\'t wait to see what happens when she meets Voldemort. What\'s going to happen when she sees Harry and Ron? I can\'t wait.

Tiff

I just read the first part and it has a LOT of typos in it... you might want to think about editing it and resubmitting it. The typos make it really hard to read and understand.

Yes, I think a beta would be good but I love this story. Was shocked Hermione moved in on Sev so fast, but what the heck. Can\'t wait for more.

Oh, if you need a beta for the next chapter let me know. I\'m going to a conference next weekend, but would be happy to help if its ready by tues night. :) I can always take a break from my dissertation

Yes, I\'m reviewing again. But you\'re rushing a lot, some of the things seem too sudden. Also, you also make Snape and Hermione REALLY OOC. Sure, it\'s great and all that Hermione went to a brothel and all that, but it\'s too OOC and too fast. A lot of the description and conversations are shallow, and some of the wording makes the story seem awkward and forced. You might want to consider a beta since they could also look at the first 4 chapters. Even if the updates take longer, the quality will be better and as the saying goes, \"Quality over quantity.\"

This is okay. Good first fic.

Interesting so far! Looking forward to chappie 3!

Innogen

Great story! I love the twist! Please update and soon! I have to know what happens and if Hermione is able to have an audiance with Voldemort! Please update!

Tiffany

a really good story. and a unique idea. i hope you\'ll find a beta to improve your style a little. it\'d be even more enjoyable if you did.

oh, please do continue but please don\'t make harry and ron too nasty/mad at hermione! why can\'t they ever think about HER when these things happen?

Draco\'s reaction should be a blast. ha-ha! And Snapes, too!!!