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Please keep the story going in the way it is headed. I am so tired of the \"good\" side winning, and this story has given me a great deal of hope that the real good side will win.
Angel

Great new chapters! It was worth the wait...but still can\'t wait for the meeting with the rest of the golden trio :)

intresting idea for a story with a good starting plot spelling and grammer need some help possibly an editor.
im willing to offer my time to assist you in the editing of your work. you may email it to me then ill fix it and send it back to you. email me or call me or text me seeing as how you know all of the above my love
ooh that ryhmed
love you

All I can say IS WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! This story will keep my attention.. Please update soon and keep up to good work!!! *waits with baited breath for the next chapter...*

go for the beta, i know i prefer to wait a little longer for a quality story, cos i see the mistakes and get annoyed, and if there are enough mistakes then i wont read the fic

awesome please update soon

It stupid to reviw my own work but to answer some stuff, i found a beta reader so hopeful that will help, when i upload the chapters the structure gets messed up so there\'s no indents and stuff, no hermione will not get pregnant, there are some good stories where that works i would find it far to mainstream to do that, Im sorry i moved the characters so fast but hey she going through a very real identity crisis we all make mastakes, and yes they are OOC but i like them better this way and it is my story so they can be who they want here, and Albus is cool and is goign to leave hermione be until later.

Morning after potion? Please? No cliche pregnant Hermione stories, okay?

Innogen


Good Chapter....
Hope Albus is actually a decent guy in this story, otherwise Hermione may be SOL....

To start, are you writing in notepad? You need to upload the chapters as Microsoft Word or an HTML document to maintain format. The other option, is to format with notepad and include HTML code (i.e.,

or with closures). Use the spell and grammar function on Word. It will help with some of the capitalization issues. Proof reading two or three times helps to turn up additional errors. Reading a document from end to beginning will help you to see spelling errors.