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by melodytriton

person selenepotter
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT was very erotic!
I liked IT alot!
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good but l8tr read mine 5 stars
you none
person tabitoo
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the first fic I have ever read that was written with beautiful poetry describing the act of making love. Hope you post more soon.
person zebraspots05
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. I liked the blending of the descriptions of the physical acts and the emotional thoughts of the two. The transitions between Rons POV and Hermoines was smooth as well.
person Bumblebee
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic!!!! There aren\'t nearly enough Ron/Hermione fics out there, and even fewer GOOD R/Hr fics. Thanks for giving this couple a chance!! I really like all of the description you have, and your grammar and spelling is correct, which is something I appreciate (not everyone takes the time to proofread and use a spellchecker). Great job, and I hope to see more from you in the future!!!
person Melody Triton
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Padfoot the Marauder:

Thank you so much for the kind words. That was the most darling thing anyone has ever said to me about anything I\'ve ever written. Honestly, you made my day. Glad you also like my style of a \'happy ending\'. And yes, Ron did need a fic where he was more than just the average sidekick. Please let me know if you have anything written here...and thanks again! --Melody
person Android29
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really nice! I love Ron and I love Hermione on top!!! GO GIRL!!!
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely adorable! I usually don\'t review that often, but I just noticed that you only got one as of yet and that\'s just unheard of! It\'s actually refreshing to get a Hermione/Ron pairing in which Ron ISN\'T a bad lover. Usually he\'s just being used as a comparison to another bloke. Also, you could actually feel the intimacy in this fic. It wasn\'t just sex, it was also a very intimate experience. Well done, I\'m keeping tabs on you girl! (By the way, I also read your Draco/Blaise story. Also refreshing to see Draco from a more \'innocent\' point of view).
person dragon34
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was great. If it\'s to be a one shot, how about doing a Harry and Ginny doing almost the samething. Or something really kinky with Draco and Pansy. Would love to see more.