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by Wickedmay

schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE FINSIH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
person camtipli
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is beyond wicked. That is absolutely, horribly, deliciously beyond wicked.

I didn't see it coming. Unexpected and twisted. Sooo twisted. Oooh, it gives me shivers, it is so twisted! Oh man, that was fantastic. I loved the ending. Perfect for the tone, malicious enough to make up for the few terrifying seconds of what smelled like fluff... Genius!
person HP Fan
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.O holy shit, that sucked! >.< *dies* the situation, not the fic! *laughs* poor draco, sheesh that was sad. ^.^ man, i want to laugh but at the same time i pity the poor git. >.< what's he supposed to do for eternity!? bwahaha, that was awesome! ^.- i luved all the ghostness, evilness and coolness. ^.^ wonderful fic!!! hurray for angst!
person Burning.Ember
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was great.
person Kat
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please write a sequel!!! Please, please, please! I have this feeling that more can be written about what happens after, like, I dunno, Harry does come back or something. I understnad if you don't want to but I would absolutely love it if you made a happier sequel. Thx
person Caz
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu They were meant to live(die) Happily ever after!!! *drowns in own tears* The story was great but you SUCK. *mope*
person Joana
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... it\'s... wow, I cried. It\'s the best ending I ever read! It\'s filled with emotions that you can\'t describe, you just can\'t. You should be proub of it, you managed , in twelfe chapter, to make me feel disgusted, aroused, interested, happy (laughing included), angry (just slightly), sad, desperate and at the end, incredibly depressed, impressed and with the firm idea that this is a wonderful fiction! You have the gift of bearing emotions in other people with the simple thing of writing! It\'s incredible, how you manged to put so many feelings, emotions, impressions and, dare I say, pictures in our heads, in the progress of the story. I congratulate on the original idea, on the short and yet long fiction (since it\'s short from length, but incredibly long from reading induced emotions), on the way of writing, on the incredible job you did at describing things, like after-death-life, without reading too much into it and giving us one hell of an ending (especially as we don\'t really know what happened to harry and because Draco really did go insane). But, As I already said up there, really at the beginning, the idea of dead Draco and Live Harry together disgusted me, and still, it captivated me at the same time.
The ending of course, I should say, that that one frase at the end, where you just know draco\'s insane and that you say that Harry, once again, albait uncounsciously, beat Draco in his own game, was... well, I think that was what shocked me the most, then Harry, in the end did that, what caused Draco to commit suicide.
I Loved it, congratulations on it!
(I never wrote such a lengthy review!)
Joana
person Trisha
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoah. Waste of time. Shitty ending.
person niamh
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING HATE YOU

it was beautiful, u fucking ruined it!!!
I CANT FUCKING BELIEVE YOU DID THAT
BURN YOU INSENSITIVE BITCH
person niamh
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*
sry for the last reveiw, it was a good story, but its so freaking depressing, and i have a huge fear of shit like that ever happening to me, so im not to good w/stuff like that =/

could you, maybe, write an alternate ending where harry comes bak as a ghost? pretty please? if u dont im gonna have this story as a dream for a long time. [trust me, its happened before] i need to hear a happier ending!please! even if u just email it to me or somthing. my email -> nmoynagh@yahoo.com