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for Why Do You Even Care?

by DrapedInBlack

person Wisdom
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Number one: I did not understand the need for that chapter, and am doubting that its actually SIGNIFICANT.
Number two: I am finding it very hard to figure out where this story is heading.

Care to explain the chapter\'s significance to the story?
I\'ll be waiting.
person -Damaged-
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute!!! Sugar highs are the best! xx
person The Queen of the Darkness
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You\'ve reached wonderful intriguing levels! I can\'t wait for more! Please update soon...love it!
person Xylor Anamay
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for more of this fic .... I love the look Draco has .... the whole gothic look .... **Drool** I was thinking ... because he hates his father and he doesn\'t want to be him .... Maybe draco might want to get rid of the trade mark \"Malfoy\" blonde/silver hair, Maybe die it black for even more of a gothic look.... But then again the whole contrast look with him and harry would fall .... I don\'t know ... just an idea. Rock on.
person Kitten
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh,
how could you stop ?
Please continue!
It\'s great and you\'re not progressing too fast at all
the characters develope quite well,
but there\'s a bit of a contradiction between Harry\'s inner thoughts
which are more zynic and mature and the shyness he lets Draco see
maybe you should make him more open to Draco in his darker form
I hope you\'ll continue soon
Kitten
person Remi
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ombj i fucking love this story! you rock my world~ this is a Slash right? cause i dont like friendship fics! well i cant wait for the next chp. awesome
person Fefs
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah... plot IS good sometimes! This one is the best! I love angst! Please update soon? You are doing such a terrific jog i can\'t wait to see what happens next!
Please??
Hugs!
person Argo
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m *so* happy that Harry is going to do stuff for himself! I always thought, that his friends was too curious and tenacious for his own good. Honestly, everyone should have life his own!
person Digger
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DiB-

Loved the new installment. Keep \'em coming! The way you write Draco has been reminding me of my own highschool rival! ^_^ *sigh*

Thanks for another great read. Can\'t wait to see this one fleshed out!

Dig.
person Cheryl
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what? no Harry, Draco love early on?! *pouts* lol - seriously tho - I thrive on dark angsty fic\'s. Am loving where your\'s is going so far (although not loving that its not all up yet!)

Anyway - Just wanted to let you know I\'m enjoying this and to encourage you to keep writing!