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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont want Draco to go there for any reason! Couldn't Harry just lock draco in that room until the train leaves? He could keep him there with Hermione and Rons help. I just dont want anything to happen to him. Please!!! Hasn't he suffered enough?
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A- awww, come on. You call that \'action\'? That was barely PG-13, my friend. B- please don\'t make poor Draco have to go through that again. I\'m okay with stories that start out with sexual violence as the trigger for the plot, and sometimes with really sad stories with sexual violence throughout, if the end is going to be happy-ish. But pleeeease don\'t make Draco have to go through that and escape, only to go back. I\'m praying for Harry to jump out at the last second to save the day, can\'t wait to see if I\'m right! Oh, and in your story, can ONLY Lucius free the elves, or could Draco free Demetri if he thought of it? Love the story, being tormented with waiting, update again soon!
~Hazel
~Hazel
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will you add soemthing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really want you to add something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY. I\'m BEYOND happy you didn\'t make Ron out to be an evil git, just a stuborn one.
I only have one complaint. When there\'s dialogue and the person speaking addresses someoen by their name there needs to be a comma.
Like:
\"I\'m bored, Draco.\" or \"Harry, want to go outside?\" (Yeah, I know, crappy examples, but you get what I\'m saying.)
I only have one complaint. When there\'s dialogue and the person speaking addresses someoen by their name there needs to be a comma.
Like:
\"I\'m bored, Draco.\" or \"Harry, want to go outside?\" (Yeah, I know, crappy examples, but you get what I\'m saying.)
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo more! i like this story!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How will they get in? I can\'t wait for chapter 11! What happens next? Poor Draco!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, Ron accepted this so well. He even offered help. I like him.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Super super super good! Honestly it took me a little while to get into this story but now I am TOTALLY into it! I can\'t wait for you to update. I\'m nervous for Harry though. Why doesn\'t Draco just send Dimitri some socks or something? Then he could pop out of there! Tell Draco to send socks!!!!!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay go one! i liek this chapter and i so hope draco will be fine...
godd work, keep it up
godd work, keep it up