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I like this alot! I\'m soo glad you\'ve written this there need to be way more stories with the lucius master/ hermione slave thing! Cant wait for an update!

This is a very good start. I so can\'t wait to read more of this. Wonderful job so far.

This is a good start. It could go anywhere at this point. I am a sucker for \"nice\" endings so I have to beg that L ends up in love with Hr. One suggestion though, please please don\'t make Hr a weak-witted wimp. I mean I know it\'s fic and all but part of what\'s so delightful imho about her is intelligence, spunk and resourcefulness. I think she would find a way to turn L\'s mind games back on him Of course she would not win all the time as he is so much older and better at subterfuge than she is ;). Perhaps you can have some kind of tension between L and D and she could play off of that in order to better her own position or attempt to escape? Good sorry for trying to write your fic for you! LOL
Anyway happy writing.

Very good- looking foward to the next bit.

wow this is so awsome i cant wait for the next chapter your real good hurry please ilove it so far

Good so far, please update soon.

Well, if she\'s got him this twisted-up in her panties, then she does have some power. I cannot wait to find out how she uses it!

Very interesting start. Cool premise. Good look into Lucius\' thoughts. Very intrigued about the direction of this little fic. Cant wait for more.