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for Power Struggle

by DepravedAngel

person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person LKinko
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! You have to keep going. Please!
person Bellezza
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sounds good so far. I can\'t wait \'til it gets going. I love Hermione/Lucius fics and I\'ve wanted to read one where it\'s after the war where Voldemort won and Hermione is under the control of Lucius. I think this\'ll be good and I\'ll keep checking back for new chapters. Also, if you ever need a beta, I\'m welcome for the job.
~Bellezza
person fluffley
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on you have got to finish this!!
person Angel
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Certianly has potential. And by no means is it boring or overplayed. It was well written. Keep it up
person Jess
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good so far, I\'m curious to see where this goes. Update soon! =)
person Jewels
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only one chapter? A good one, an inticing one, one that makes me want more.Keep up the good work!
person robin
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i have set the timer 30 sec i like the L/H pareing and i think the dinamic between hg and dm gives plenty of opretunity for plot twists. i will enjoiy reading more if you continue. dam i went over time ..... oh well
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far....This pairing isn\'t done enough justice, and your story seems to have given it a different twist.....
More please!
person EmZ
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not Bad, please update soon and email me when u do!