rate_review Reviews

I... can\'t... breathe.

that

holy shit.

RON!

mother

It was a cool story. I exspecially liked the way you had the theme of opposites throughout it. You have a great gift of making believeable complex characters (I know they\'re not technicly your characters, but you know what I mean). That was a little creepy what you did to ickle Roniekins, but also a nice way to show how much trust has been betrayed in their lives. Well, as I said, it was neat and set a mood that was very much felt and wonderfully retained. Keep up with your writing.

P.S. If you haven\'t already read them, I think you would apriciate Anne Rice\'s Vampire Chronicles. The have almost the same mood as your piece.

What did Draco mean about only Hermione left? Was she cursed as well? Oh how horrible! Harry raped Draco who he came to care for and Draco raped by the man he felt safe with and started to care for as well. Now there is nothing. Not even forgiveness. Will you continue this? Or leave the story here heartbroken and shattered?

YOU EVIL PERSON!!! How can you write a story that good and leave it as a one-shot?!!! I Demand You Write A Sequil!!! NOW!!! ...please? pretty, pretty please, with a Harry on top? Honestly, I need another part, I will beg you, I will service you, I will do Anything!!! Please? If you don\'t I hold you responsible for the phyciatrist bills!

That was quite possibly the most amazing fic I have ever read, I adore it. It was so good, and so bad, and soooo good. Please, write another chapter? Just for me? You could send it in an e-mail if u don\'t want to post it, but make it a happier ending, please? Okay, enough begging, I con\'t expect you to bow to my whims...yet...but gosh darn it, that was fan-bloody-tastic! Ok, long review, I love your story, and would love to see a happier ending added, the end. MOO, love ya!

Cool story, what I call \"powerful\". Is it the end? Please write at least one more chapter!

Ok ... a little hard to follow at times, but overall -- great story! Thank you!

omg... *twitch* that was... kinda creepy in a good way. by saying good i mean that the writing was good. and the story was too in a fucked up way, lol. anyways, keep writing! i like your style.

This story just took my breath away! I mean this story had more depth than alot of the stories I have read and considering the fact that this is a one shot makes it all the more amazing to me. Everything from the descriptions to the complexities of the curse was simply amazing. You did a phenomonal job on this story and I stayed up till 4 in the morning to finish it I\'ll have you know! There aren\'t many fics that can get me hooked in that way But yours was worth the hours of loss sleep.

This story (scuse my French) Fucking Rules! And I will be looking out for more fics from you

Absotively Posilutely Brilliant piece!

Neko\'s Rate: 5 stars

(Rate Goddamn it!)

WAH!!! This was such a beautful story, but the ending was jest so...so...unbearable! I hate sad endings. although, I do understand that there really wasn\'t any other realistic way to end this story. Would it be at all possible to perhaps make a sequel where the ending is a bit nicer? Sigh. I didn\'t really think so, but it never hurts to hope.

btw, I couldn\'t help but chuckle when I read Draco\'s full name. Mainly cuz I\'m writing a story where Draco has a son named Gabriel. It\'s not on aff.net cuz it isn\'t a hard R story...

I understood, you were planning this like a one-short, but, maybe, you would consider to write a sequell, even not H/D slash, their relationships are too damaged, but about one of them finding Ron. Hope, his punishment would be as cruel as his crime.