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by Seraphix

schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
From now on, try to stay in one tense.
person Elisel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
could you please kill ron... pretty please with a cherry on top. I know its a one shot but killing ron would be so good...
person HarleyD
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

Seriously... that was devestating. I'm not even sure what I feel about it...

it was good. very very good. well written, I liked the way you wrote it, it was very unique and captivating.

A lot of crap gets written in fanfiction so it is a true rarity to get to read a story by such a talented writer.

Simply incredible.
person Threesisters
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was so intense to read, I\'m pretty sure it must have
been very hard to write. I don\'t know what you were hoping to
acheive but I found it thought provoking.
person Nattie88
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! That was...omg...FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...WOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW...lol..that seriusly was amazing.....let there be more!! if there is more plzplzplz email me!!! omg...it\'s deploro_anima@hotmail.com omgomgomg..that was great..
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read this before and it floors me everytime.
person zentiis
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! that was brilliant, excellent writing and plot.
seriously great stuff ^_^
person mortal
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weirdly wonderfull... great origional story line....... poor draco! youve traumatized him for life!
keep up the good work any way!
person strawberry poo kmoo
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome! : tries to describe awesomeness, but fails :
I really liked that it was in the presetnt tense, it\'s always so neat reading stories like that, seeing as most are written in the past tense.
It was odd that Draco pushed him away when he seemed to want him to kiss him. XD
I also really liked the thing where Draco had said something about being figuratively penetrated by evil, and then, well XP. It was awesome though ^_^^_^
Even though this is great as is, and it might wreck it if you did, I want to see a sequel of this XD. Your writing style is so awesome! (I have used awesome 4 -- now 5 times -- in this XD)
-spk
person ura
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could you write a sequel, please? I like the story a lot, but it is too angsty and too open ended. Harry could earn Draco