rate_review Reviews

I am really enjoying your work so far! Err... right, well I normally never really write a review... I\'m just shy like that. But after reading the third chapter I felt that I must. Personally I think you set up an important part of the story with the sex thing. Harry couldn\'t say the words and lie like that, and the whole thing seemed to just be about Harry\'s pleasure. You could almost tell that Harry didn\'t care, not really, or at least not in the way it matters. However, you can use this to your advantage and make Harry and Draco have a wonderful time that includes both of them in pleasure, not just Harry. This could also help Harry realize that he does have stronger feelings with Draco than anyone else, that is if thats the general direction of the story... if not then ignore me, for I am an idiot anyways. But one of the first rules of writting is to learn to make mistakes work for you, not aginst you. Never apologise for your writting, instead make it work for you. Most of the time the reader won\'t even be able to tell if it is roughly written if you don\'t point it out. I mean if every writer were to point out their mistakes, books wouldn\'t be as much fun as they are. Everyone makes mistakes. You could spend a life time revising and the work still wouldn\'t be done. Just go with the flow and play with it. I\'m sure your readers will love it even if its rough at times, I know I will. ^_^

What WAS that sly wink all about?
*thinks*

and I\'m liking this...
it\'s really intriguing...

the story line proves for some fun...
the two of them cooped up without anyone coming or going...
er...
poor choice of words *falls over laughing*

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yeah, it\'s time for bed...
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
I know of at LEAST two people who would like to see more!!

Get to the DM/HP smut, yeah!

I like. I like alot. *Giggles* So what, Draco and Harry alone in the House? *crosses fingers* Can\'t wait. Update soon.

Oh, and if you\'re still looking for a beta I\'d love to help (especially if it means I get the story before anyone else does ^_~) I\'ve betaed several times before and written my own yaoi fic (not on AFF yet unfortunetly). Anyway, email included, so contact me if I can be of help.

~Loki

seems nice though the sex scene wasnt that bad really, cuz mine are horrible so have no fear your not alone, and hurry up with the Drakie-ness I love him so much!!!!!!!!!!!

Aj

Well, well, well, this is most intriguing! I am very curious as to how this summer will turn out to be. Please post more soon!! This is a great story.

Decisions decisions... screw Draco

This is a good start :) The summary sounds interesting, looking forward to reading more. Please update soon!