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Its not working right, I hate it when that happens its pur meanying-ness. Go AWAY!!! Okay so really loved the chapter it was great even if it was twice grrr!

AJ

this sounds exciting! i cant wait for more. great job!

I can\'t wait to see Seamus\' reaction to Harry\'s letter. I\'m guessing that Seamus will either send him a Howler, not talk to him again, or tell the Daily Prophet that Harry\'s gay. If he did the last one Harry would not be happy. :)

Great chapter. Hope that you update soon, I read chapter 6 even though im reviewing on 1 im just to lazy to go the damn thing itself. Bad Girl! Anyways i know that they should wait, but I dont want them too (said in a whining voice) its not fair!

:P

AJ

I like your story so far. I dislike that Harry was with Seamus, I dislike the sex scene (only because it was Harry/Seamus, not because it\'s badly written)
About your sex scene, how about if you draw the pleasure out, this one was awfully rushed. And if you describe more details, that makes it more fun.

Now, go sit behind your computer and write more, you promised rimming!
*tries to glare to get you to work*
...

*fails miserably in glaring and smiles*

Good luck with the rest of your story.

This story is so awesome so far!!! I can\'t wait to read more!! PLEASE update soon!!!

*holds out biscuit*
Muse\'s shouldn\'t go hungry...

lol

and the sex scene was fine! I don\'t have any suggestions, but I will say that the best way of learning to write them is reading other\'s, and deciding what feels good and what doesn\'t...
...
*snicker*

good job, D...

ANYwho: When I saw Harry and Seamus in bed, I was like \"\"oh... WINK!!... ROCK ON!!\"\"
lol
and THEN when I saw them breaking up, I was like \"\"NO!!\"\"

lol, I\'d\'ve much rather had Harry and Draco going at it, deSPITE Seamus, and then him finding out later...
lol

that\'s just my sadistic, \'lets cheat on our lovers\' nature...

*shakes head at self*

anywho: great job on the quick updates! I\'ve seen quicker *wink wink* but not too many people get them out within any decent amount of time...

fast updater, great story so far. I like you :) please continue.

Nah, we couldn\'t hate you with such a great story!
I\'m really liking this!
the development is great!

wow!! well ok, I didn\'t expect that, Harry and Seamus? NOT my favorite match in the least. Atleast they broke up, it might sound kinda harsh, I know, but Harry and Draco are just ment to be together...lol Oh the sex scene was just fine, I know the feeling when your writing one, it feels weird, but when you do it a few times, it won\'t be so bad....well update soon. I can\'t wait for more!

Toodles,
Pamela^_^