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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noo! More! LOL. Awesome, awesome, awesome AWESOME!!! I love it! Keep writing!! ^.^
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the relationship with Draco and Harry wen\'t way to fast... afterall, it has only been one day in each others company... well... you did a good job writing the thing overall... just would have been better if they waited longer to get together, Harry just broke up with semous... soo... meh... it might just be me...
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story. very well written. the whole idea is perfect my only critisism is in chapter 7 i think you use the word \'love\' way to often. their not sissy gays. dont have them call eachother \'love\' at least.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this chapter was great, I love this whole story it\'s so good, i especially enjoy how snape keeps walking in on them, it\'s funny.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT... keep writing and PLEASE update soon
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome I really love it please please update soon.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It was long awaited, well not really but it seemed like it. Too bad they didn\'t have any sex but i mean they can\'t have it all the time or this would just be smut. But smut is good. Smut is *very* good. Write soon!
Aj
Aj
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello..i think your story is good but then i have to admit that it\'s quite boring...that thing with seamus is very unexpected and i\'ll give you a thumbs up on that...the plot is good but you\'re making the characters like puppets...you should properly motivate your characters for them to not to seem like puppets and make them seem that they think, act, and feel on their own...but no worries...i know that you\'ll get better someday...good luck and hope you\'ll continue to write this story ...i\'ll be waiting.. :)
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it\'s so sweet!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!!! When will chapter 10 be up? Great story line as well! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE e mail me when the next chapter is up!