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for Summer with Draco

by ladyblaze2511

person Jessica
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im totally loving this story! please go on i need to know what happens.
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! best story ive ever read!!! you have left me crying soo much! there such a good couple!! im basing my fanfic on urs.. ive made the first chapter.. i love your work!

*crys*

Its just sooo.. good!!!!

*screams at you for next chapter.*

Hun.. this story is 10/10!
person darkprincess
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey... your story is good, and i haven\'t finished it yet, but i really thought you should know that you\'ve spelt clothes wrong repeatedly. \'cloths\' is just more than one piece of cloth. \'clothes\' are also known as \'clothing\', which are pieces of \'cloth\' made to be worn. if you fix that you\'ll have my highest praises for a well written story
person kenz
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi! i just read your entire story up to this point, and i think it is very good. Draco is a bit outta character, but for your plot line it works. One suggestion i would make though is that maybe you could explain things in a bit more detail. For example, when Harry and Draco were mad at each other, it seemed like one second they were yelling, and the next they were back in bed. Just a suggestion. I have the upmost respect for people who actually take the time to come up with a developed plot line instead of just plain ol\' smut. Although there is something to be said for that as well! Please continue this story, it\'s driving me crazy!
person smurf
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* this is sooo good. the end of chapter...*thinks back* two chapters ago broke my heart i swear lol. I was crying so hard when Harry told Draco to go to his own room and then you said that Draco cried himself to sleep!!!! *sobs*
person Phoenix Black
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Update soon!
person jess
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesom story continue!!
person Fefs
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah.. but is so cute these love fights... I\'m with a goofy smile... I\'m in love with this fic, really! Is just too cute! Please update soon, ok? Hugs!
person Fefs
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hum, i love fights!! Love fights i meen! They are so cute!!! Please, please, please update soon so i can read them making up? Please!? Hugs! I already toldo you i love your fics, right? =P
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor boys! I can\'t wait for chapter 15!