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for Thrown Overboard

by RandomnessDotCom

person ChiChi
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Interesting concept about the Polyjiuce Potion. I loved this chapter, it was great! And Lucius\' pleasant introduction at the end actually made me laugh, surprisingly. I really love this story, and you are doing a great job1 I love all the detail you put into it. I can hardly wait for more, so keep up the great work! ^______^
person BrIgHt_EyEs
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LUV THIS STORY! YOU\'RE AMAZING AND I LUV YOU! *GLOMPS*
person Maura
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like where this is going. Great work so far. Keep it coming!
person Priss368
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems Snape thinks Harry is really dead. Wait til he sees a very alive Harry at a later date. I wonder if you\'ve thought of Voldie not only deciding to have Harry pregnant, but instead of rape & torture, use seduction to draw Harry into being a willing participant (or at least feeling like his body has betrayed him due to the great sex)? After all, Voldie will want his babies to be healthy, so that means Harry must be well taken care of. Just a thought. There aren\'t many V/H fics with that slant on them. Most are of rape & torture. Priss
person CatrionaMalfoy
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet Voldemort created a fake Harry and sent it back while he keeps the real one imprisoned. Kudos on makeing Snape evil. They\'re always sexier evil. Yum! Poor Harry though. He should have said something in parsletongue though in my opinion. That would have shocked Voldemort for a while.
person Michelle Malfoy
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, could you update? I mean, this story has real potential, so why don\'t you UPDATE?!?!
person L
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is not much stories beginning at Third Task. It\'s promising. Keep going!
person Megami_Layla
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic. I can\'t wait to see what will happen to \'Poor Harry\' in the next chapter! Update soon and I\'ll give you a cookie...*wink*
person ChiChi
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! This looks very promising and I can\'t wait for your next chapter! ^_^