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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love it!!!!!!! Umm... Is this story will be DM/HP/SS,mmmmmm........LOVE THOSE THREE
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you need to reformat you post. It is completely unreadable. I wasn\'t able to read the chapter because my eyes couldn\'t focus. Use paragraphs. Put double spaces between paragraphs.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK, there\'s really only one thing that I\'d like from you, and that\'s to put some spaces inbetween about 4-5 sentences or so, that way it\'s not all just one big long paragraph(it makes it easier to find WHERE you are in your reading AND it\'s alot easier on the eyes). OK? I\'d be sooooooo thankful if you\'d do that, cause otherwise: IT\'S GREAT!
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story so far, keep going please.
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No Please More!! and while you\'re at it come out with the Harry as a slut story that would make my day. Anyways this is great. Different not so heroic Harry!! Well Done. Merci!