rate_review Reviews

excellent, excellent story! i loved every moment of it and i will be amongst the ones to ask for a sequel, so please write one! *hugs and kisses*

I have to admit that this was a great story. I kinda got mad when you killed Draco but i let it go...lol...can\'t wait for the ending, can Ron and Hermione suffer a little for the agrevation they caused Harry? if not thats okay, they only real issue i have is how come this story doesn\'t have a real name?
Keep up the good work!!!

Stupid Dumbledore, like Harry ever going to trust him again. I can\'t wait until Dumbledore\'s plan backfires on him completely. Even better when he sides with Voldemort once he discovers that Voldemort disapproved of Lucius\' actions. Dumbledore was so wrong when he said, \"He will not leave us for that monster! He will stay where he\'s needed and not falter from the path I have chosen for him!\" And he pretty much just lost himself the war with that one line.

Excellent! I wasn\'t sure of reading on in this fic when it became apparent that Draco was going to be killed, but I\'m glad I did! I hope Dumbledor gets what he deserves! If Harry joins Voldie prior to Dumbledor doing his mischief, it\'ll be wicked! They could conquer the world! I know of a really good Harry/Voldemort story that is really amazing. It\'s called \"Possession\" by Jade Tatsu. She\'s posted her backup on this website with the primary being ff.net. The ff.net one is up to chapter 68! The smutty details are here of course! Please keep up the good work! This is really good! Priss

I disappointed that you are stop the Harry/Draco pairing but I look forward to Harry Snape part. Please forgive me spelling erors as I not from Engish speak country.

This has been a good fic so far. I have to say though that if this is a deathfic-Draco getting killed during the summer by his father or Voldie-you should make sure that is in your summary. Based off of the last sentence in the last chapter, that\'s what I\'m assuming. Priss

aww.... and i actually liked Drake >.< Cant wait to see what Harry does. I love your fic. keep it up ^_^

Well, I think you have a good premise (not original, but interesting), but Harry\'s sudden change is not explained so well. We don\'t get any sort of inside look into Harry\'s POV, and Draco\'s change is just so drastic from the book. There could be more dialogue, as you explain a lot of things just in description, and their relationship moved very fast.

On the other hand, I do like Harry\'s changes (he seems more mature in a depressed sort of way lol), but why did he choose Potions to excel in? Why not DADA? Maybe you explained and I just missed it. But you have a good grasp of vocabulary, and a good plot to work with, so with a little editing, it should be a great story. Good work!!

This story is beyond hot. I love it. It\'s well written, detailed and the sex is amazing. I love how you made Harry\'s appereance change. I love guys with long hair!! Anyway, keep up the good work, it\'s brilliant!

I tried to read it (note the tried). Paragraphs are essential. It is impossible to read and follow as one big paragraph. It looked interesting, but if the formatting doesn\'t change it just isn\'t feasible to spend time trying to decipher it. Sorry.