I was really enjoying your story, the sweet romance and the interesting changes and detail you put into characters (making Hermione a Catholic was a nice little note, things like that). I have a tendency to stop reading when a story loses me sadly. The quick jump into sexual relationship with the boys almost did it for me, I would have liked to see a bit more tension grow between them first. You pulled me back in with the interesting scene on valentines day. Unfortunately you lost me completely when Harry learned of Draco though. I just couldn't believe your characters anymore. He didn't show enough anger or loss you would think to have with someone finding out their lover was dead. When Ron made those comments I was waiting for harry to jinks him or somethings (considering he has JUST learned that Lucius had killed him). i pushed on to the rest of the chapter but at the end of 8 I stopped. I hope the rest of the story turns out well. please keep writing, I do like your style, even if the reaction you have your character portray is a little subdued considering the intensity of the plot you chose to use.
very nice well done... I look forward t more of you r stories.
i would like to know why it was left untitled very good hoping for another wonderful piece of work from you real soon *kisses*
When I read this story, and all the author's notes, I can only assume that some, though not all, had some trouble withwhatyou were writing. I don't agree. It's not what we usually read, it is not what most of us would expect, but it was cleverly done. It might not have an obscenely large amount of details, or be perfect in every little detail, but it was a good story. It is actually only one of a few good stories I have found here, and the only one good enough to get me to review it. No arrogance, just my honest opinion that it was good. The highest praise I can give you.
i like it really sweet sad that draco died though but it did serve it\'s purpose and he wasn\'t forgotten
yay dumbledor died!
on chapter 4 so far, loving it love new harry and drake, a 3some with snape is very very appealing:))))
suprise u had to do the explaining list or am i the ony one who thought all that was obvious. off to finish the rest of the story(its complete but so brill had to reveiw b4 finishing it!).x
I like your perspective...wasn\'t too crazy about losing Draco but I am a Snarry fan as well. good work.
this was one of the best fic\'s about harry turing dark that i\'ve ever read!
ok so i dont mean to be a major bitch hear or anything, however, if harmione is so devoulty catholic, she wouldent have been in hogwarts, because wichcraft is a sin. and also she would have never taken divination, because those who tell the futchure will forever have their heads cut off in hell. (so said my preist)
