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for Revenge of a Slytherin

by HexxKitten

person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d really like to see a straight conclusion to this story.....since it\'s just gotten even more interesting. This even begs a sequel.....!
person Silver
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean???? Last chapter?????????? NOoooooooooooooooooo!!!!! never!!
Please go on with the story!! It is brilliant! I just love this story and your writing is awesome! And your Lucius... well... he is such an adorable Bad Guy!
I would be happy to read many more chapters! Btw, what happened to Valdemort? What are his plans?
Cu soon hopefully,
Silver
person Three
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I read this one and now I wish I hadn\'t! Just when it was getting to the best part I realize I read all the parts you have posted! How dare you keep me in suspense you Hexxable kitten you!!!!! I LOVE it by the way, and you better let me know when you update it!!! *appreciative lick*
person Vermillion Rhodes
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Don\'t stop THERE.....!!!!!!
person Silverdragon67
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I just love this story! And the last update is absolutely awesome!!!!
I am really looking forward to seeing what will happen next. Wish I could be there watching, hehehehe... or even helping? :)

CU
Silver
person shedraconis@yahoo.com
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! I think you turned out a couple chapters on me there, eh? Great again, a really great story. I hate she tried to poison him though, the sex was awesome!! Well now you know what is on my brain. lol!! Till next time...........
Tootles!! ;-)
person Sarah123
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1. Generally *only* straight A students get into Oxford and Cambridge, unless daddy gives enough money to build a new college to one of them! I doubt this random relative left her enough money for that. Even if they did, would she want to get into uni that way?

2. Why would Hogwarts students arrive in Hogsmede in a carriage? They walk, the village is only just outside the school grounds!

Quite enjoying it apart from those two things that just bugged me a bit!
person Sarah123
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and Flourish & Blotts is in Diagon Alley, not Hogsmede. Honestly, I know the point of fan fic is to make the world your own, but that usually means within certain confines of the world as written by the original author.
person caleb
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Cannot wait until the next update, you\'ve really got me hooked!
person loone_drow
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really sorry, but can you say Mary Sue? Perfect body, perfect personality....almost as interesting as a dust bunny under the sofa. Maybe try to make your characters more realistic and three dimentional and you might have a good story on your hands.

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