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by wyvern

person Chavela
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

Ok, so I have never ever read Snarry, but damn ... that was so freaking hot. Wow, I wish you would write a sequel or something. Or write more of them. That was just yummy!
person dfntgrl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!
person xlandax
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can hardly believe you have never written any slash before... that was amazing ;-). cant wait for more! update ASAP!
person ender
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was just.........wow! No words to describe how hot that was! You are a God!! Will there be more? Pretty, pretty please!
person emily
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very interesting story, but good none the less, i hope you will continu it and maybe making Snape starting to want Harry as Harry, instead of his father and maybe making them fall for each other .........
please continu the story
person Kat Potter
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very... erm, interesting. :) I like it! Please more!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh so sexy it made me squirm in my seat. i hope you update more often than i do, because i cant wait for the next chapter!!
person Yana
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry
person Melody Triton
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\" Come on Potter, come on! Are you going to be late for this too?\"

That was the best line in the whole story. Nicely played. The end was actually a little scary, with the tomorrow-thing. Snape & Harry doesn\'t do it for me, but your story read very fast and was easy to visualize. Thanks for making Snape so yucky, as he is yucky. I was thinking \"poor Harry\" at the end, even though \'your\' Harry didn\'t seem to mind it all that much.

Folks who simply cannot stomach the Snape/Harry thing probly won\'t like this story. I\'ve never really read a Sn/H fic all the way through until now. Will I again? Perhaps if you write one...since I\'m used to your style now...not that I\'m asking you to write another Sn/H slash-fic. Perhaps you could try Harry and Ron, or Harry and Draco. Or perhaps you have? I\'m tying together a Harry/Ron fic now. We\'ll see how it goes. I\'m eventually going to write a HET fic as well...dear Hermione can\'t be left out in the cold now, can she. **waves and dashes off for the tea pot** --Melody
person lightgoddess
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should definately write more slash. That was hot!!!!