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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story! even though its only the begining, it has SO much potential! great job, keep working^^
~K~
~K~
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems like you need more to this story. The beginning is weak. Come up with a strong opening paragraph to draw the reader in. Try reading some other stories to work on your wording. Don\'t give up.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so awesome
the best story ever
please continue
the best story ever
please continue
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sounds pretty good so far and it seems to have alot of potential. Update soon!
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this could get good please please update soon
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s ok
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Spell Check for Merlin\'s sake Spell Check!