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for Third Night in Stockholm

by jsdelibes

person ice owl
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this has got to be the best Dolores Umbridge story I have ever read. It actually makes her seem human in ways other stories can\'t catch...
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well writte, Justine!

That\'s a very interesting story! I think you should do another chapter. It does sem to end in a \"to be continued\" kind of way. Well I mean, you don\'t HAVE to continue it...but I would.

What else can I say? You writing style is EXCELLENT, and you describe things so well. I really enjoyed reading another centaur story...as I\'ve written a story involving centaurs myself...though it is a bit more NC-17 than yours :-P

I must say, this site NEEDS more good creature stories.


Richard :-)
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mal! Sorry to respond in a review, but I couldn\'t find you on the author list.

\"Stockholm\" is a reference to \"The Stockholm Syndrome\", a curious feature of human psychology whereby hostages over time begin to sympathize with their captors. Admittedly three days isn\'t much time, but Bane is just so sexy that I would have fallen for him in three minutes, boy howdy!!!

Thanks so much to everyone for their reviews. It TRULY keeps me going!
person Mal
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot, though it\'s difficult to imagine it being Umbridge... I really hated her when reading the book! I like your writing style and you make the centaur sound beautiful and dangerous, and irresistible too. I\'m just puzzled by the name of this fic... what does Stockholm have to do with it?!?
person dancingsalome
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was quite beautiful. I never felt any sympathy for Umbridge before. I like how you drew on the myths of centaurs, they weren\'t always as noble as they usually portrayed today.
person AJAngelique
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Ish breath taken.
That was very well written and quite poetic...considering the subjects at hand *clears throat*
May haps there be another chapter in the future?
person PrincessLemon
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am highly pleased with this story as I was captured by every word of the story and it intruged me to no ends.
I gladly called this a peice of art and look forward to veiwing more of your peices in the future.