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for To Teach

by lightgoddess

person Phoenix
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* That chapter was so sweet and fluffy! I loved it! It really made my day! ... or night... *shakes head* anyway! I hope you update soon!
person Relicwitch
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will they finish the game?
LOL!
Very nice chapter, by the way. Loved the mild hesitation in Sev to sleep with Harry!I thing that it\'s endearing and sweet from Severus to not press Harry more.
Even if he doesn\'t do sweet.
Hope you can update soon, with another yummy secret of Severus or this time Harry.
See you soon.
person Silveria
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The image of Snape... in tutu... NOW I know what is it like to howl with laughter... Thank you. I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
person Phoenix
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughing so hard it hurts* Sev in a tutu? *laughs harder*

*ten minutes later*

Okay... I\'m okay now. Heh. This chapter was so good! Poor Severus though. I feel bad because my best friend lost his younger sister last year so it kind of touched me more in a way. Email me with an update please?
person Relicwitch
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can i say..........Finally they did it!!!!
LOL
Sorry i didn\'t review the oher chap, but i didn
person Papaya
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I had to read three chapters to catch up, but it was well worth it! So much to say, where to begin? Of course, they like King Arthur legends. because of Merlin . . . fun! And I love a musical Severus! I think everyone understands the power that music holds to evoke emotions, and usng music in yuor writing to evoke those emotions was just brilliant! And they consummated their relationship, yay! Very well written, very erotic, very emotional . . . I loved it. And I also really liked the fact that just because they\'ve made love doesn\'t mean they\'re going to spend all of their time scrogging! A really great update!!! ;-) Thank you very much for the wonderful entertainment and please update soon!
person Phoenix
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh... please update soon! I love this fic. I usually don\'t read Harry/Snape fics, but I was looking around and yours just popped out at me! It is really good!
person Phoenix
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... ummm... hehe *runs for cold shower*

*half an hour later*

Yeah.. that was hot! And sweet at the end.

Can you email me when you update?
person Relicwitch
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a evil cliff you have here!
And a nice, true romantic chapter.
You described nicely the romantic set and you almost send me to tears with the last part of the chapter.
I loved the idea of Sev playing!
Can\'t wait for the next chapter....and a new evil cliffie....
Hope you can update soon.
Bye.
person Relicwitch
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Nice chapter...Once again you wrote a chapter that shows the nice slowness of the relationship between Sev and Harry.
I agree with everything that Papaya and Aden said about the story, and i hope you will continue this .
Don\'t stop.
Hope you can update soon, and see if Harry help Sev with the sunburn! It\'s quite painfull and nothing that a nice massage with Aloe\'s oil to soothe the pain can\'t take on. Bet Harry\'s good with his hands *Winks*
See you around.