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Fun chapter! The boys got caught! I could just see the look on Dumbledore\'s face when he saw them through the fire and heard Sev\'s comment . . . I would have laughed out loud if it wouldn\'t have woken my family! So, next chapter we get to see Harry\'s birthday party . . . are they going to tell anyone about their relationship, or are they going to try and keep it quiet for a while longer? And are we going to learn about Harry and Hermione? Was it a kind of \"I don\'t want to die a virgin\" type thing? Looking forward to the next chapter! As always, thank you for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!

LOL!
The memory of seeing Albus Dumbledore schocked to silence, should be put in a pensieve...
I loved it!!!
And i also loved the way they got caught.
I\'m waiting for more...so update soon.
Hope the next thing are the reactions of the rest of the \'\'family\'\'.Can\'t wait to \"see\" the dumb face on Ron.
See you.
Relic

Wow! I actually just discovered your story tonight, and instead of being a good little student and finishing my homework, I\'ve just read this entire story up until chpt. 21. I absolutely LOVE your writing style, it\'s incredibly evocative, and this is one of the only stories that I\'ve found that has actually made me like Snape. The idea of secluding them together for so long is a wonderful idea, and I adored the beginning of the story. I wouldn\'t be reading these if I didn\'t like the smut, but you made such a wonderful plot that even if the whole thing had continued innocently, I don\'t think I would have minded - it was that engrossing and well written. I can\'t tell you how many times I\'ve felt their emotions, especially embarrassment when Dumbledore popped up in the fire! Thank you so much for such a wonderful and entertaining story. I can\'t wait for #22!

Your story is so good. I just love Snape and Harry fics. Yours is well written. keep up the great work and upadate as soon as possible.

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What a great story. I like the slightly wounded aspect to each character and how they got together seemed both natural and interesting. I wonder if they can continue this into the school year. Please don\'t tell me its going to fall apart before the school year. What kinds of adventures do you have planned for them over the course of the summer?

Yeah you can. My mum taught me when i was younge. ^.^ Its only deadly poisenious if you eat them when they are not ripe... And many of the medieval potions were made with the unripened berrys to create a veriaty of poisens. Its quite interesting actauly. Because if the berry is not ripe it can do you no end of harm and can actualy kill you. But if it is ripe is has such a posative affect of your system.. ^.^

Oh and that title looks very familar.. I just cant place it... XP

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Another couple of fun-filled chapters! Yay! So, Harry\'s plan is to finish his work quickly so that the rest of the time (something like two and a half months, if I\'m not mistaken) can be occupied by . . . other things. ;-) Sounds like a plan to me! Are we going to find out how Hermione was Harry\'s first? Are we going to find out more about Severus\' past? As far as the line, \"Nothing like . . .\" I\'m sure it\'s from a movie, but I couldn\'t tell you which one to save my life . . . I\'ve got a Swiss cheese memory. Anyway, thanks for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon.

I have no clue where the quote is from, all I know is I laughed my ass off when I read it! Hehe. Please update soon!

Hi!
Nice chapter, this one...and a tad hot....
Will they have a steamy bath scene chappie? ;P Hope so!
Let\'s see what the new chapter brings.
See you soon.

I just finished reading the 5th chappy and i have one thing to say... Deadly Nightshade is delicious. I eat the berrys when they are ripe.. They have like 50x the vitimin C of a orange in on berry... They are yummy. But you have to make sure only to eat the ripe ones. That are very very black or you can die of poisening.. I got most of my vitimin C growing up from eating those things. ^.^

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